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Tawnypaw COTN tryout updated

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I'm going to try to get back into COTN, it was my first one of my rp groups and was there since it started. :P I miss it! XD

Name Tawnypaw (Tawny paw) (Tawnyriver)

Age 8 moons

Personality: Shy l Caring l adventurous l

Shy:
Around most cats she is very shy, she would keep to herself in crowds and only speaks when spoken to. The reason why is because she is afraid she will mess up and say the wrong things, and embarrass herself, it's one of her weaknesses to be like this, she lacks self confidence.

Caring
She originally thought that she could be a good medicine cat, she wants to help others and never turns away others in need, she tries to see good in everyone, which makes it hard for her to side with her clan sometimes.

Adventurous:
When she is bored, really bored, she can get a bit restless, when bored or lonely she can do things that daily she would not, like trying to take on large foxes or trying to spy for her clan, she usually would like to take someone with her, she wants other cats to see that she is like this as well, she can be quite a show off at times and may come off a bit self centered.


Brief History:
Kit: Tawnykit is the youngest of the litter of Minnowflash and Barkclaw, being born in Pineclan with her brother Rainkit she thought Pineclan was the best and had the pride from the beginning. She and her brother had a normal clan life when they were kits, of course they had their parents, and they looked forward to being apprentices like any other kit. ( Of course we have to make her story interesting huh? ^^) Normal day, normal routine, it was something Rainkit and Tawnykit were tired of, always doing the same things, even playing with apprentices were not very fun any more, so the two voted, of course agreeing, they set out for an adventure, the thing all kits are told never to do, they left camp, Rainkit thought that maybe they could hunt, and bring it back for the elders to eat, maybe they would be apprentices then! Such was the thought of the kits and started toward the small river that led to the other clans territory.
After many tries and fails of catching small minnows, they began to play around instead, not really taking notice of their surroundings and even forgetting to keep watch for patrols!
As they were playing they dared eachother to go into the water. At last it was Rainkit's turn, he went out pretty far, it would have required an experienced warrior to not lose their footing, and Rainkit was not such a cat. Slipping, he got carried farther down the stream, Tawnykit did not dare go in after him, the current swept him away, drowning him.
A patrol found Tawynykit by the river eventually, she told them what had happened, and a few days later, Tideclan found a small kits body washed up on their shore, they brought it to the the other clans, and Pineclan claimed him, they held vigil for the poor kit.
Strangely, Tawnykit was not punished greatly, since they said that she had not intended for him to die, but her apprenticeship was greatly questioned by most cats.

Apprentice:
Since she was only a kit when her brother died, she could hardly understand, let alone remember him when she began her training, all she knew is that she and her brother had gone out and Rainkit had died by the water.
He parents died later in her apprenticeship, her father the same way of her brother, being swept by a strong current, and had gotten knocked out and drowned when he couldn't hold himself up longer, and mother to old age.


Time Zone: Mountain time zone

Relationships:
:bulletred::bulletred: Loathe/Despise
:bulletred: Discomfort
:bulletblack: Acquaintance
:bulletblue: Friend
:bulletgreen: Good Friend
:bulletyellow: Crush
:bulletpink: Love
:heart: Mate
:bulletpurple: Family
:bulletorange: Mentor/Apprentice:
:bulletwhite: Respect/ Admire
N/A

Roleplay Sample

Her tail curled with amusement. Her bright attitude made it easy to hang around more quite cats like him. Flicking her ears she meowed. "Okay, then I 'll tell you a truth." She stopped to think a moment, gazing up at the sparkly sky.
"I can honestly say, it's been really fun today." She mrrowed. "FInding you out there was such luck!" She waited a moment before continuing. "Okay, but it's your turn now." She said, giving him a friendly shove. "What's yours?"
A game. She used to play this game with her family, everyone would have to say a truth to the other, and in her little family in was great fun- worry washed over her to think that maybe he thought it was really kit-ish.

Not a very good example, but this is about as good as I get, but I do do small posts from time to time, when I am only answering or have to leave soon, so sorry if that is not good. ^^;

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Allizia's avatar
Im going to have o ask you to edither some before I can accept. What happened to her brother isnt possible. There hasnt been prey scarce in the clan, no hot days, so it doesnt fit. Owls rarely come out in daylight, even when prey is scarce. A hawk, maybe, but cats would still be out and about, and it wouldnt be hot like that. So the history needs to be changed. And her parents cant be senior warriors, as there hasnt been any in the clan at all, so they wouldnt fit.

Her history has to fit the clans, and it doesnt.
15 moons would be a warrior by now, no matter the three weeks late she started.

Please fix these things before I can accept you back into the group.