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Sunflash's Epic Fail

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XD so this is my first rp in DUtE and he met Violetpaw from Airtribe XD to find what he thinks of her you can look at his ref again, I've put extra friends stuff there maybe sometime I will try and upload the whole thing....
anyway, part of the rp went a bit like this:


Well I'm sure Sweetfur likes you, you should get to know her better." Violetpaw meowed. Sunflash smiled in a friendly way "I'm not sure I want to anymore." he meowed, only half joking.
Violetpaw's ears felt hot, "Oh... um.. Thanks.." she meowed. Senseing her discomfort he went on. "It..... it was a joke." he meowed. "Oh..." she meowed, feeling dumb "A joke.." She glanced around. "Where is Sharp-paw?" she asked. A Joke... Sunflash looked up, he hadn't noticed the apprentice had left. Violetpaw stated to back away. "I guess I better go..." she meowed. A joke..


Now she's pretty upset with Dumb Sunflash XD IDK what will happen, Sweetfur or Violetpaw? Or will she even forgive him? will Sweetfur even like him? XD only time will tell, only thing Poor Sunflash knows is that he is no good with talking to girls XD
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Minnow-to-the-moon's avatar
Ack...sometimes forbidden loves annoy me.

But I have to get used to them for RP groups...

Anyway, it's a great drawing, though I recommend in the future maybe giving Violetpaw a troubled face?
I love the tree and grass, though I suggest to blur the sky so the colors blend, and make the mountains a bit sharper, since well, they're mountains.

Just some helpful feedback. c: